jueves, 7 de mayo de 2015

Writing 7

Giving an opinion

The goverment wants to introduce a new law which is about introducing school on saturday mornigs for improve the level of knowledge of the students. This is completly sure that it'll have negative consequences.

First of all, if the law is introduced, teenagers and students will be tired because five days of going to school are heavy, so if they introduce one more, it will be more heavy. So then students won't be able to improve his level because they will be 'out'.

Furthermore, I think that this isn't the solution for improve the level of the education, because if with five days it doesn't work, with six neither.


In conclusion, five days are more than enough and the goverment have to think about other plans for improve the knowledge of the students.

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